Hi, Xone101
Thank you for your input, I really appreciate it. I'm so happy that someone spare a time to read my very first public VN and leave a comment like this. It's make my work feels worth it.
Yeah, english is not my first language, I think the reason why the grammar looks weird is because I basically use my own language first and then translate it to english. And I mostly use Google Translate to translate it, so yeah, sorry for the bad english teehee. (Should have ask for a proofreader)
And for the background, I just take free image from google and edit it a bit. Sorry about that, I'm afraid that drawing the background will take too much time. I even scrapth the music I made for the campfire.
And I think I need more time to developt the character further, I actually was planning on introducing Wage by making him save the MC from a monster, but again, time.
Did you get the hint I put inside the story? Their name actually have a meaning, The secret of the body, World Zero, The Connection between The Eye of Curse and the heroes,
Anyway, thanks again for your input. I can't wait to continue the story. ;)