Aaaaah, thank you for the comment. Yeah, there's not much to talk about this VN right now. I'm still fixing the writing, art, music, and programming before continue to build 0.1. This VN is a rush job in the first place LOL.
Yeah, I love adding humor in my VN. And since I'm the creator, I love to break the 4th wall occasionally. But for Kliwon (MC default name) he just using his knowledge from our world.
Thank you for your input, I really appreciate it. I'm so happy that someone spare a time to read my very first public VN and leave a comment like this. It's make my work feels worth it.
Yeah, english is not my first language, I think the reason why the grammar looks weird is because I basically use my own language first and then translate it to english. And I mostly use Google Translate to translate it, so yeah, sorry for the bad english teehee. (Should have ask for a proofreader)
And for the background, I just take free image from google and edit it a bit. Sorry about that, I'm afraid that drawing the background will take too much time. I even scrapth the music I made for the campfire.
And I think I need more time to developt the character further, I actually was planning on introducing Wage by making him save the MC from a monster, but again, time.
Did you get the hint I put inside the story? Their name actually have a meaning, The secret of the body, World Zero, The Connection between The Eye of Curse and the heroes,
Anyway, thanks again for your input. I can't wait to continue the story. ;)
I think Connor is already dead. Remember the opening scene? He died inside the car with wound on his stomatch.
The entity, I think it gets inspire from movie the thing.
If my guess is correct, one of them is not the real person from before. I have a guess by process of elimination and looking at horror movie tropes. But I will save it until we have more info. But if I'm correct, this will be the greatest foreshadow and hint of all time.
1. Will Antonio become OP at the end of the story? 2. How Darius power work? Does he use somekind of physical enhanching magic or it's something more complex, like stopping time just to your body? 3. How advance Vistella compare to Earth? It's seem the technology is a bit shifted here and there like they have portal but no phone? Can you imagine how advance they can be if they can grasp quantum mechanic?
I'm kinda sad that the three main love interest are on their own adventure. Can't they invite Cody and Alvy 😭?
But looks at the bright side, I love when the four recommended student are finally gather together (YOU PROMISE THE DOUBLE DATE 😭). And when they battle, Rose and Cole have to fight Alvy and his summons, while Cody try to look pretty on the side line, Masterpiece.
