I liked it! I agree with Ted routes having a very obvious relationship with each other and it's interesting seeing how the choices Colin makes changes the outcomes of both routes. Neat seeing the option to stay with Ted or keep it to being friends.
The survey says it's for 0.17, btw just to let you know!
Typos I saw: "And then, you and Colin arrive home to find his friends there. You realize this is the best chance you have to relieve..." (relive)
"I don't know why stuff isn't making sense, but I know my brother can't [be] the reason why." (missing 'be')
"Caijoru nonchalontly kicks it away." (nonchalantly)
"Even if Ted's not fully real, I think [I] still have feelings for him." (Missing an "I" after "think")
"Hey, look who it is. The vermine who kindly lent me his car." (vermin)
"The Ted you knew was just a normal guy. This Ted it a four hundred year old..." ("is" and hyphens technically should be between "hundred-year-old")
"Yay. He's here" (missing end punctuation (idk why this specific one I noticed and just bothered me lol))
"It's nothing fancy, but I made my own. I played played a few..." (typed "played" twice)