The story was good, with a narrative that was quite easy to follow. Simple but clear dialogue that reflects the heaviness of the moment. The ending, however, felt a bit lacking — I would’ve liked to see a bit more ‘blood’ XD
I definitely would have taken it further with more blood, however, there were so many details I wanted to fit in before hand, which left me with no more room. So, I agree with you completely, that more blood would've been excellent, as I love to create long works...
