Your game has a visual style that really caught my attention — it has something intriguing, and the narration is very nice too. I would probably choose a different kind of music, even though the current one isn’t bad; maybe changing it during combat or even earlier could improve the atmosphere.
I kindly ask you to try my game as well and let me know what you think. I had some issues because I accidentally deleted the original file, thinking I could still make changes during the voting phase. I had to reupload everything on itch.io. You can find it here: https://robylogic-71.itch.io/the-starbound-butterfly2
The voting is still on the main submission page. Thank you very much!