The art, music and intro were lovely and you can tell the great care and time you put into their creation. The game play was where I found some issues in that it was more just a rail road narrative. I was hoping for some sort of mini game play like a potion making system or some barriers that require the items found in a particular order, etc. Also the small of amount of cursing felt out of place compared to the the overall narrative tone. I am still looking forward to playing the full game and think your presentation was immaculate.
Cheers!