I definitely felt that "stream-of-consciousness" vibe with the writing lol, I guess it only got hard for me because I really loved the dream-like experiences they were experiencing but when they'd do more ADHD ramblings I'd be like "oh here we go again" hahaha. Which I didn't know it actually was a self insert based on what you said I was just assuming, so in that case I mean hey, I love that it's an expression of yourself.
Also Satoshi Kon is my favorite director of all time, I even have the limited edition maromi plush sitting on my desk and is my pfp on most social media's usually. He inspires my approach alot to art and I love that he's doing that with you too. LET SATOSHI KON'S WORK RESSURECT THE ART WORLD OF DREAMLIKE EXPERIENCES!
I did plan on trying to finish the game anyway tho, just because your artstyle and presentation is that cool. o7