I enjoyed the atmosphere for this one. Not usually a fan of horror games but this was ok to play for me.
Personally I thought the way the phone/computer screen keep appearing and disappearing between the inner monologues when you chat with Eli is distracting to me. I would rather have the textbox just reads directly over the computer screen.
Personally I'm not a writer myself, so I don't know how much my feedback on the writing itself is valid, but my few thoughts on the language of the inner monologue is that it's not very natural sounding. Like in the very first parts, when the protagonist thinks about her roommate and the lines read something like "My Roommate. The one who sleeping across the hall" kinda thing reads awkward, like a lot of expository texts and story, not someone's actual thoughts. So I have to say some of the impacts is lost on me from the awkward writings from time to time.