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very well put together game, quite impressive.
there was just one thing that kinda irritated me in the story and that was that both of them didn't really had anything substantial to say to each other. for a game about having a chance to talk to a dead loved one again this felt a bit underwhelming for me / the part that needs more flashing out for it to feel like an actual story. I hope you find this feedback helpful rather than insulting.

No, this is very helpful.  Someone said the hollow conversation added to it, while you are another person who wanted more from the connection. I get it! It's very insightful to see how many people were left wanting more from the story.  Makes me think about how I could possibly expand upon it.  Thank you for your insight and feedback. It's very powerful and I will be taking it into consideration for sure! How would you have liked to see them connect further being that *spoilers* Eli wasn't supposed to be really Eli at all *spoilers*.  Any help is always very much appreciated. :)