It’s a nice way of storytelling for a beginner. Dark. Sad. I think the artistic aspect is quite sufficient. When I first read the description, I thought it would be a short game—and it really was short. I only pressed F three times and left-clicked a few times. Still, for a first attempt, even making a game with an ending for a game jam is an achievement. I hope you continue this journey and tell many more stories. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you so very much for your nice and kind words! I have been writing short stories since I was young and am on the fence whether I will turn this into a (now that I did this for the game jam) or turn it into a book of sorts. Definitely want to get better at game development and try to expand on this though :)