This is a fun novel, the characters were thought out quite well & there stages were also very well made but a few of them do need some re-working (Mia stage 8 in her lingerie & stage 9 zoe) though it would be kind of good if there was a way to be hinted at what was needed to trigger certain events in the game as sometimes i would make multiple characters go up one weight stage and was not sure if because of that i had missed an event because of it.