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This shows a lot of promise & passion from a dev who cares what there making, I do can't wait to see what it will be like when it's fully finished.

Though a question for the dev (And likely a commonly asked one) How fat are you planning to make all the characters get from a scale of 300+ lbs to Beyond immobility weight? 

not bad with what's there for content so far but please add a aim marker for the casting of spells so people know where the spell is being aimed at.

got it to download but only on the Itch.io app itself if you try downloading using the browser it just still says its quarantined for some reason

Great visual novel so far Dood, Keep it up Dood!

Though i would let you know your game's been quarantined for some reason

cool to see your done finish writing the story all together although it would be nice to know what's in this update in general & also if i can make a suggestion add a way to made modding this Twine game easier as i think there might be some people who would love to add there own twist to this story if you allow them

Nah they take quite a while to release an update best to just follow them & wait for an e-mail to notify you of a new update

liked 0.5 so far though feeding the mc eventually bugs out if she gets too big & the hips disappear for some reason when you check yourself in the mirror and have no description when interacting with the mirror

This is a very Interesting game, so simple, fun and i don't think a lot of other developers have gone this way before when it comes to this niche

I hope you keep adding more to this project of yours also perhaps adding a few other things

* Meetings with important people who cam make special requests to you

* An activist movement that try to undermine your progress every so often

* More than just the secretary you can see fattened up throughout the game (Be it characters that you can date/marry throughout your term)

* CG events and or images of the public gaining weight as your inact policies

* Have certain policies react to other policies you already made 

*Perhaps even have the possibility of selecting a sprite representation of your character in game (Perhaps also gaining weight throughout there term?)

Not bad start with what there is and reminds me of https://anvilandthechipmunks.itch.io/big-aspirations game though that one concentrates more on Weight gain focused but i can see hopeful things from this new game

If you do not mind i would ask

*Are you planning adding more expansion and or other kink/niche content to this game?

* Will there be datable characters?

* How many more locations will be added as the development progresses?

honestly captain, you need help to get this game done now i do not see you finishing this on your own!

I know you said you wanted to make this mostly on your own with espeon but at this point you have to find one or few more people to give you a hand in making this game now otherwise it's not coming out in time

not bad game though helps to add a scroll tab for longer sections of text so we can scroll down the page and continue