I think those are solid titles, but you could swap the more common words with ones that are a little more unusual:
Back From the Tavern -> Return From the Tavern
Deer, You Are Being Hunted -> Deer, You Are the Prey
Red Balloon of Happiness -> Scarlet Joy Balloon
I think you get what I mean, you can sometimes try to look up synonyms for the words in your title to make them stand out more
I disagree with the scarlet balloon. No one calls a reddish balloon a scarlet balloon. It's basically a compound English word to stand in for any colorful balloon. While you can have a green balloon, "green balloon" does not invoke joy and fun. There was a popular song in the 80's that might have influenced or established the connection.
If the title would have been "the red balloon", I would agree, that you could change the color to something more memorable.
Curiously enough, I would accept joy balloon as a synonym for red balloon already.
