An old issue is popping up with dialog for me. The text is using first and third person randomly. For example, it will start off from Darian's POV, as if the reader were Darian using "you, you're and so on," then it would change to Oriana and refers to her in third person using, "she, her, the woman, the snake, and so on." When it comes to some of them, it will give my perspective AND theirs in one dialog, both in first person, which is confusing since the game will use "you" for both NPC and PC perspectives in one paragraph.
this would be for the condensed model.