I really like the art style - well done, Nawf! I'll be waiting for different facial expressions with new updates.
I comment after playing the game through twice.
Who is the writer? The name should be in the Itch page. The writing is high quality - I appreciate the careful choice of words to describe behavior, the descriptions of the emotional states of the characters. It makes the characters come to life.
I found out that the name of the protagonist can be blank - it's good to add some validation of the player's input.
UI design wise - it would be better if the choice options do not appear over the character portraits. That breaks the immersion.
It is fantastic that you include resource management - it makes the game more rich and replayable. However currently there is no tutorial how to play that mini game. I am not sure how the map is related to the amount of coal. Probably you didn't have time to do it within the jam period and are going to expand on it later.
Some small language mistakes I noticed:
With the way thinks are run <== things
She smile drops a bit, <== Her smile
This game has potential to expand. You should keep working on it. Good luck!