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I think making a short 0.05 or 0.01 update for some wording changes might be a decent idea at some point, maybe for when you're taking a break from the heavier work since it (hopefully) won't be that taxing? I love the game and find it pretty entertaining so far. But some of the wording confuses me sometimes. 

Like saying "We met Suzzie a month ago." makes it sound like the duo met her a full 30ish days ago when in reality it's been like... 5 to 6 days? (At least it makes it seem that way to me) Unless I missed a timeskip somewhere. Meanwhile simply changing it to something like "We met Suzzie last month." makes it easier to piece together the game's timeframe as the 27th(ish) of April would technically be "last month" although "last week" would be an even more accurate depiction of the time.

And then "All the time" doesn't make sense either as it should be "The whole time." Because "All the time" is more like a response to a question like "How often do you go out to eat?" while "the whole time" is a response to questions similar to what Suzzie asks the MC.

This is just a little nitpick of mine that honestly barely changes anything. I just kinda figured I should mention it just because, since my brain gets stuck up on all the little details, like the timespan of a game, for some reason and other people's brains might end up doing the same.

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English is not my main language, so mistakes like that will happen in every version and I don't feel the need to drop tiny new updates for just grammar and typo fixes.
All grammar errors pointed out to me and and all typos my players send to me are always being fixed in the newest major updates.

I added the things you said to the list and will ofc correct them when i'll be finishing the next update.

1.2 part 2 is shorter and smaller than part 1 and should be out very soon so it won't be a long wait anyways.
Thanks for help! Means a lot <3

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Makes sense to stuff them into the next major updates instead of dropping small updates that are JUST for grammar and stuff. 

I'll try and drop some lists of various errors and typos I find in that case. And once again it still got the point across, it's just a side effect of my brain latching on to random shit that ultimately doesn't matter. Your English is pretty great though, even with a couple grammar errors/weird word choices the sentences you write still get the point across. So it's far far FAR from the worst I've seen. And besides I think us pointing them out helps you improve even further so it's kind of a win-win... Maybe. I actually don't know how much that helps without explaining why it's incorrect.

Anyways, I'll see what errors I can find and throw them somewhere if I feel like it. Keep up the good work!

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Oh, yeah it helps a lot. I wouldn't be able to fix all the typos if people didn't point them out to me. Our proofread team is three insomniacs so we ain't great hahah.
I think I'll open the discord for public when ill be dropping part 2 so there will be an easy way to contact me easily.