Hello, Ginkgoos. I really liked your ideas, I'll try to put them into practice and improve the story. I was going very fast and using my English, which isn't that good, it's not my main language. I could start writing in my native Portuguese and ask Google Translate or even ChatGPT to translate it, although it's possible the translation won't be as I expect and might sound a bit robotic, but knowing that you can inform me if that happens, I'm not too worried. I had in mind doing missions, but not regarding the BE, but it makes sense and seems like it will make the story flow more smoothly, so I will do it. I was already thinking about changing the pharmacy and putting a character as a vendor or even replacing it with a mage. So going forward I'll start rewriting and start thinking about the future of the story.
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I appreciate that you read my text and took my ideas into consideration I’m happy I could help you, and I had thought English might not be your first language but I didn’t want to assume, there are a few discord servers with a ton of people that love this kind of content and I feel that there might be someone there that knows Portuguese but speaks English primarily if the google translate doesn’t work out for you but from this text the expression and understanding comes across a lot better so I think translating it would be really helpful, also just a suggestion but you might want to make a discord server or join another one and ask around for help with anything or get inspiration from other games there are plenty of people that would love to help you make this game as great as possible, https://liferake.itch.io/albero-verde the discord like to that game would be helpful and https://preggopixels.itch.io/seeds-of-destiny, these people are also very nice and love helping creators while also having a ton of good inspiration, I can’t wait to see how the game continues to grow in the future, I wish you all the best