Hello again. Yes, I will still change a lot of things. I intend to change some dialogues and parts of the story, trying to take a less pornographic direction and focusing mainly on character development; I already have other characters in mind. In this latest update (which is not complete, I published it just to save my progress), I added two new characters. For now, they only have an introduction, with no belly expansions or births yet.
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Hello, Ginkgoos. I really liked your ideas, I'll try to put them into practice and improve the story. I was going very fast and using my English, which isn't that good, it's not my main language. I could start writing in my native Portuguese and ask Google Translate or even ChatGPT to translate it, although it's possible the translation won't be as I expect and might sound a bit robotic, but knowing that you can inform me if that happens, I'm not too worried. I had in mind doing missions, but not regarding the BE, but it makes sense and seems like it will make the story flow more smoothly, so I will do it. I was already thinking about changing the pharmacy and putting a character as a vendor or even replacing it with a mage. So going forward I'll start rewriting and start thinking about the future of the story.
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