This has a lot of potential it’s a really good start, I have a few pointers that are just suggestions to help make the game more enjoyable than it already is at least from my perspective but of course these are only my suggestions, 1st I think some kind of progressing story might be nice besides just the expansion of the two characters, it would add some more connection to the characters and make them feel more alive but also it would allow you to do the second suggestion I had 2nd suggestion since you can get through the content pretty fast I think it would be a great idea to add a limit to milk amount besides breast expansion maybe by going through a quest with a character like helping another female get a larger breast size herself or helping give her a larger pregnancy or main story progression it would give the game more pace and make each expansion more rewarding, 3rd it would be nice to have the characters talk more depending on the size of their belly or breast size and maybe give an option to just talk to the characters see how they are feeling more details and descriptions (something like that can take a lot of time and work so you could probably find someone to help with the writing for characters and other things like that that would take a lot of focus I bet there are a ton of people that would want to help, 4th have people help with editing text errors, there are a few sentences in the game that don’t make very much sense or are just very vague so it might be helpful to have people point it out and help out with that, 5th it would be nice to have the story explained more, the reason why the streamer has magic breast milk the reason why she chooses your character stuff like that, and 6th and this is just kind of something I really want but it would be nice to have like 6 or 7 other girls you can do the same thing with as the streamer girl and the main character impregnate them and make them bigger over time like the streamer girl, over all really great base for the game and I love the idea and gameplay mechanics
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Hello, Ginkgoos. I really liked your ideas, I'll try to put them into practice and improve the story. I was going very fast and using my English, which isn't that good, it's not my main language. I could start writing in my native Portuguese and ask Google Translate or even ChatGPT to translate it, although it's possible the translation won't be as I expect and might sound a bit robotic, but knowing that you can inform me if that happens, I'm not too worried. I had in mind doing missions, but not regarding the BE, but it makes sense and seems like it will make the story flow more smoothly, so I will do it. I was already thinking about changing the pharmacy and putting a character as a vendor or even replacing it with a mage. So going forward I'll start rewriting and start thinking about the future of the story.
I appreciate that you read my text and took my ideas into consideration I’m happy I could help you, and I had thought English might not be your first language but I didn’t want to assume, there are a few discord servers with a ton of people that love this kind of content and I feel that there might be someone there that knows Portuguese but speaks English primarily if the google translate doesn’t work out for you but from this text the expression and understanding comes across a lot better so I think translating it would be really helpful, also just a suggestion but you might want to make a discord server or join another one and ask around for help with anything or get inspiration from other games there are plenty of people that would love to help you make this game as great as possible, https://liferake.itch.io/albero-verde the discord like to that game would be helpful and https://preggopixels.itch.io/seeds-of-destiny, these people are also very nice and love helping creators while also having a ton of good inspiration, I can’t wait to see how the game continues to grow in the future, I wish you all the best