I agree that while there's a lot going on inside that is all very 1:1 with the various details of Chang'e's myth, it's difficult to get that all across in a trifold! I'll have to have a think about what the core element there is perhaps. At the heart of it "Elixir of Immortality" is the broad idea, the myth underneath a little more particular. Good ideas!
In terms of the blurb and cover together I kind of did wonder if nothing at all there might work and this is a great indication that I could try it.
I appreciate that you enjoyed the Bioforge! During the last sprint there keying the reader in to what it can do suffered a bit from space running out. Some rewording for post-jam is my plan for a little bit of everything especially in regard to that.
Thank you for the support and actionable observations.