Pamphlet is Z-fold - the moment I printed out a mockup and folded it I spotted that I actually screwed up and night should have the title page on the right. Stretching across the fold - yeah that could be an issue.
Split title is deliberate - the two halves as equal possibilities. Though I couldn't figure out a way of starting in the nightscape, it would be an interesting inversion.
Other stuff - *nods* *nods*