- Intriguing and horrific cover art!
- Great colour choice and clean, well-balanced layout. Really like the background texture. One thing that's hard to parse is the black boxes on black background of the rooms.
- The boxes to map convention is a bit hard to follow for this configuration. A mini-map would help! (extra material?)
- Mira broadcasts are great!
- Not clear, but implied in description of Dining Room - is the crew required to locate and save Harlan in order to get paid? (if so, include in briefing?)
- I'm not sure how the crew discovers they're meant to go to the Engine Room. Maybe some clues in the briefing (e.g. central heat signature detected) will get them searching for the maintenance key.
- Straightforward, easily to follow and implement, classic Mothership... but capitalising ANCIENT MYTH doesn't make it suddenly theme compliant haha
(errors: renowned xenobiologist = renowned xenobiologists; Vicky Baldren = Victor Baldren?)