The design of this is just great. Lots of visual interest without feeling cluttered.
Some thoughts:
- The "CRW" section has some minor contrast issues, at least for me. The white highlight blends into the top of the letters and the background writing impacts legibility a bit. Maybe the whole thing needs to be as dark as it is in the center.
- The real villain is the insurance companies! Too real.
- I didn't realize the albatross even had an associated myth. TIL!
- What is the purpose of the wake commands, either evolutionarily or as a conscious act on the part of the albatrosses? I see how it complicates decision making for players.
This is a really fun creature/encounter and I wish there was an adventure here too. It's also disappointing the players won't see the in-universe documents that are part of the module. They are so good.