Hey, thanks for the feedback! The threats themselves were meant to be limited as I wanted the focus to be in the feeling of the place rather than specific dangers (a sense of melancholy rather than terror). I get the feedback on the descent table - I'm not sure I'd turn what I have into a sequence of events or have a series of events with this as a modifier table.
I may expand this a bit into a zine down the line so that I can add more content while maintaining the minimalist design, but we'll see!