The good: - I personally like the writing, even if it isn't everyone's taste
-The character designs are very good, notably the MC. He's actually got character and isn't *insert generic brown hair brown eye self insert MC*
-Animations are pretty good.
-Mia exists.
-The font is easy to read! There's a surprising number of times this isn't the case in VNs, but thanks for the black outline my guy. I mean it.
-Story is interesting and I like the slower, more grounded pace.
The bad: - The bonus stickers. I've read through to the current update and didn't see a single one. Maybe a highlight or brief pointer on the first one so players have an idea on what they should be looking for?
-Typos. There are.... SO many typos. Mostly being brought up because I saw mention of a proofreader. Not sure what they were actually checking but it sure wasn't typos. Similarly, there's some minor grammar changes that could occur, but those were way less noticeable.
The ugly: - Not really a good or bad but the achievement popup needing to be clicked to continue kept throwing me off.
All this being said, I will be dropping some cashola in the Patreon, because I am invested.
Love to hear you liked my game, thank you <3
About stickers: I will probably change the opacity from 20% to 100% in next update. Some people said it's been buggin them too, so I'm gonna make it easier.
About typos: Jesus there was so much more. Our proofreads usually go like this: - we open the game with my friends and go scene by scene, and in almost every scene we fix something.
But yeah. It's still a lot that is getting missed by us. And two kinda-dyslexic dudes and one insomniac-always-tired girl are not the best team for typo fixing we could make (my god) but we're doing our best and will keep trying to be better hahahah.
Usually newer version fixes MOST of the typos from the previous one.
(It kinda turned into a funny thing between me and my amazing proofreaders - to see what people will find that we didn't - and the funniest one lately is that in 1.2 part 1, I forgot to change the placeholder "band name" in mia/suzzie office scene hahahah)
About the achievement pop-up: I'm gonna be 100% honest - I don't know how to code it another way. When it doesn't need a click, sometimes it stays on the screen forever, and I spent a week on trying to fix it alone and couldn't find a way. So I specifically made it to require a click to bug proof the game. I'll try to do something about it in the future.
And since you joined patreon( 💜💜 ), make sure to check out the latest wallpaper set because I cooked a gourmet dish this month and I can't stop flexing this set hahaha.
See ya around.