Grading this with the fact that it's a WIP and assuming it will be completed with similar quality. This looks great! Visually nice, clean, intelligently laid out. I love the flavor and it's very mechanical which I also love. I think what I want to see as you finish this is maybe early on a paragraph that can quickly pitch me on how to mechanically engage with the scenario and how that relates to the "object of the game," so to speak. Other than that I would focus mostly on some minor editing for clarity and other proofreading.
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thank you!
how does something like this sound for Mechanically engaging relating to the win-con:
“It’s a war of attrition to keep the old boat afloat long enough to get the job done. A race against time, crew members spend rounds running through the ship from System to System, using System Abilities to remove Obstacles from their path. Keep it up long enough and they’ll save the star system.”