Really solid submission. Would easily find its way into my physical collection if it goes to print. I think my only nitpick is clarity in a couple instances.
- Is the second step of suit compromise or removal taken every two rounds or is it only on the initial event?
- Bend #7 is a little confusing to visualize at first pass.
- Bend #8 I would make a panic check and increased stress
- Orange #5: maybe say something like, “when approached…” instead of “when close…”
- Orange #6 under expanding Hector could be more concise to be, “ Ever-expanding, unable to move or speak, HECTOR will breech the container in 5 minutes unless destroyed.
- IMO: Test chamber artifact effect could be sanity save and +1 stress from witnessing. +1 stress and Panic check when touched. Ratchet up the tension.
Nicely done!