I love this module and would definitely play it.
The art is fantastic, the design is super useful, the writing evocative, I felt like everything was intuitive and worked well together.
Two small pieces of feedback:
1. The first location was labeled the crash site, I wasn’t clear why it was a “crash” and not a “landing”. If it is a crash I feel like that could’ve developed more in the ship description maybe, “as you approach the moon XYZ happens.”
2. I think the front page is less appealing than the back and interior. If I saw it in the store it wouldn’t “Jump off the shelf” at me. Maybe the moon could be shaking or breaking apart? Show the drill ship on approach?Something that conveys the urgency, mystery or excitement of the scenario.