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Aesthetically this is fantastic and the adventure is really exciting. You've created a scenario relatively large in scope considering it's just the front and back of a single page, and without cramming too much text into the trifold. The map feels extensive but the descriptions are short enough that it also feels slick. I wouldn't be surprised if this a short campaign arc (2-3 sessions) but also wouldn't be shocked if you can get it done in one.

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I appreciate the feedback. I ran a partial playtest (didn't have time to finish), and you're absolutely right. I thought I was designing a one-shot, but it looks like it's going to be a two session module. I didn't plan for that, but I'm okay with it. Thanks, again!

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That's not a bad thing, I'm impressed with the amount of content you were able to fit in while still maintaining a clean layout and good aesthetics! I generally try to cram as much content into mine as I can but those things usually suffer as a consequence.