Art: Non-existent at present.
Writing: What is there is pretty good, but obviously there is a lot missing. One typo: "steel blood"
Game Design: Not sufficiently complete to rate, but I like the idea of an Ancient Greece Panic Engine game.
Theme: It's definitely Ancient Mythology, but also definitely not Mothership, so I can only give half marks.
Layout: Looks like it will be easy to follow once complete. Follows a similar structure to the ones I've done.
Utility: Not finished, ergo not very usable.
Favorability: I don't personally mind, but I feel like some would find it questionable to submit something that is both incomplete and not for the game the jam is organized around in order to promote a separate project. I think the project itself is interesting, and the adventure looks like it will be fun. I don't feel like I can give more than three stars in any category, though, as I'm imagining the emotional experience of being the author of one of the weaker submissions and losing to 5x "[NPC NAME]" and a bunch of lorem ipsum.