First, I liked this one.
Now I guess this is more of a test game to see if there is point in continuing the game, hence I am not going to comment much on minor things, since I assume you are working forward on them, like nothing happening when clicking "Options"-button.
Music created atmosphere very nicely, I was right in the game thanks to that music, and interested in what is going to be happening.
Movement was quite quick to figure out how it worked "ASDW" + Fire.
The puzzle. That was such a shame I missed it. And this is design question for a future.
Problem was that I first picked the First Console, which was the place to put the puzzle, and started solving it. Thought they were numbers divided by other numbers, and was trying to figure out what those numbers were, and eventually just decided to go through all the possibilities to solve it. (also thought that the letters might actually be some coding error, as in it displaying those characters erroneously there, and therefore I ignored them)
Only after that I went to check the Second Panel, which was actually necessary to properly solve the puzzle, and when I realised the idea, I felt such a shame I missed that, since it looks like you had made pretty excellent small puzzle there. I really liked the idea, that first of all were the pictures telling which book, then to figure out one of the numbers, you had to realise that those books were opened from certain chapter, hence you would know that since two showed same book and same first (alien) number, that number would be representing the chapter number, therefore you could know which verse to look from the other book.
I also liked that it seems like there was also need to figure out couple of alien numbers, as in, you would combine them together with other alien numbers to figure out the number (at least I assume that was the idea). Very fun little puzzle, and one that was still easy to figure out, yet really made you think about it, and having to use a bit creativity to get it done.
However, I think the third puzzle had an error. You were looking for "G"s from verse 17, and there were only 3 of them, yet the answer was 5?
Or did I actually not even figure out how the puzzle should have been solved. I mean I assume it was Book by those pictures, then Chapter : Verse, and what letters to look from that verse.
Regarding the christian message part. This depends upon what your target is. If you are targeting this to be played by non-Christians, then the dialog was a bit bible verse heavy, as in, it made it bit hard to understand the games plot and so on, as it was talking with bible verses.
However, if you are targeting this specifically for christian audience, making this basically bit of Edutainment game, then this is really great, count me in, Im interested in buying this one, since while it distracted a bit from understanding the plot and from the flow of the plot, it was at the same time an excellent, entertaining way to remind about random bible verses (although these verses werent random in sense that they did fit the dialogue/plot, but from learning point of view, random verses to be reminded about).
Dont know yet if this has life as a normal game. But as a Christian edutainment game, I am already looking forward to buying the full version, so definitely good for that purpose, although, I guess, the market is very tiny only unfortunately.