The mystery is very compelling otherwise and sucked me right in. I am quite fond of the artstyle and all the pieces present in the game as well.
Pretty fun, I like the writing alot, although I have to say that I was confused on where to go after the gunshot for a moment, then after that it was a bit weird that it needed a key input to transition screen on the next screen. Right after telling Sofia that Cheri didn't off herself, you can also choose Sofia and Adam dating again which triggers the same convo. Strangely enough I had to trigger this bit 3 times before I could choose "left-handed" to continue.
Have faith, the errors don't take away from the fact that I'd play the full game, based on what I saw here.