The 3D environment looks really good and also controls nicely. I think there is an issue, where the text does not fit the screen and has a scroll bar on the right that you can't really interact with so you can't see the full text and instead of "I should go straight to bed" it just says "I should go straight". The 2D section could of course be better, but for a last minute thing it is still pretty good.
Awesome work!