Hey I played your game and is working well, here is my feedback...
- cool story and intro!
- great art style.
- i like how there are images that go along with each part of the text.
- it is a lot of reading to get through.
- I ended up click through a bit quickly and it was cool to see how the world developed
- awesome to see all the graphs at the end of the game
- I liked how the story wrapped up, really great concept.
- adding music could help build the vibe of the game.