Interesting take on the murder mystery angle. The story seems to zero in on the social media age.
Thanks for making this video! I had a really good time watching you play it. Regarding some grammar issues, you guessed it right. I'm from Argentina, so English is not my first language. I made all the coding and writing in five days, kind of a jam thing during this quarantine. I've written the story directly in English—I'm trying to work like Beckett, working in a second language to focus and not get too 'comfortable' with language. Anyway, I'll try to improve the proofreading process in my next interactive stories!