Heard it before, liked it, and still do.
This evokes big souls game vibes for me, and the story setting could work for that very well in the sort of Lies of P style, now you just need to win the lottery and hire a developer to make the actual game 😄
Maybe if you continue this more at some point adding a b melody might make this even better since its just the iterating on the same melody throughout, but the a melody is nice and the track works just fine as it is now.
Good work!