Beautiful harmony and melody ! You really nailed the melody impact trait. Your story is told beautifully well.
If I may emit criticism, some VSTs can be janky sometimes, like your solo Cello. I also feel like some of the electronic elements don't always blend very well, but I'm aware there is a part of taste in this judgement, so I won't let that bias the notation too hard. It's kinda difficult to point at, but I think it's the fact that there are times when there's only an electronic kick with the rest of the instruments being folk/orchestra, I think the track would benefit being bolder in its electronic side, and use it as a way to build intensity
Despite this I enjoyed the track a lot, the electronic part was surprising but I could really see this in a professional setting. Godspeed !
Melody clarity 5/5
Melody impact 5/5
Composition 4/5
Listenability 4/5
Correlation to theme 5/5