Cool game, I did manage to beat it. I do think the map is a little confusing but I understand it's cause of the Yume Nikki inspiration. I really like the character portraits but a lot of the art did look like down scaled images with more harsh colors which again I understand is part of the mood. There's some cool mechanics but some of them like the guy in the wardrobe (the star plush head guy) feel pretty unfair cause there's no indication it will happen before it does which I think kind of fights the game design, there should be some warning for when a wardrobe is being guarded. Would be cool to have a map, I know again you're following your inspiration but Yume Nikki doesn't have traditional game overs like your game does so that's something you need to consider if you continue this,
Unfortunately the game overpowered my mic volume (I lowered it cause it was too loud in the last game I played ૮◞ ‸ ◟ ა ) and I couldn't adjust it in game without causing an echo but here is my full play through & review