The atmosphere was dense and felt very tangible, but I had quite some trouble just running the game: There were some drops and stutters, sometimes lasting several seconds. Additionally with a touchpad on laptop, the controls were very cumbersome, but that is nothing I would hold against the game on a jam scope.
I got stuck on the bottles puzzle, like many others, apparently, and overall I felt like I progressed through some of the others without understanding why. I wasn't sure, if the poems were supposed to be part of the puzzles or rather the reward for solving them. I couldn't sort or classify them in any way either, so it left me with a feeling of "Is this wrong or am i doing it wrong?" Essentially I would have liked more clarity on how to interact with the poems, really.