this was so lovely!! the presentation and prose were really captivating~ especially towards the end i felt like it had gotten cozy, which was a nice journey since adeleide is struggling in the beginning. its like a bite-sized spiral... and it comes around to resolution :) reminds me to be grateful in my life for my own friends and all the times ive been there hehehe. i know in the end you say this was kind of experimental so i just wanna say i rly enjoyed it!! im glad you learned a lot and i hope to see more projects similar to it in the future :D