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I really loved this one! It was a fun glimpse into the world of being a maid, and it made me think about if there are clientele out there like this!! I really loved how we get to know a little bit about all the other characters and what their deal is. The visuals and music also were amazing. I loved the opening video and song a lot, especially! I feel like it's sort of rare to see them in the scope of a game jam entry! Overall, it was both entertaining and also I enjoyed the moments where it was more serious, too <3 Good work :D !!

THIS WAS SO GOOD. i feel like the atmosphere was immediately set and i was SUPER immersed in this gorgeous game from beginning to end. every element was stunning, from the story and the pacing, to the art and especially the textures, to the programming and the way the GUI was set up!! and of course, the sound!! i feel like it really helped enhance the horror elements. i almost rarely have physical reactions when reading something but when i tell you how many times my jaw dropped or i had to squint and shrivel up in horror... DAAAMNNN.... a total 10/10!!!!

soooOO cute!! heres my creation :3

this one was on my reading list for awhile and im so glad i got to it today! really unique premise and i enjoyed watching all 3 characters interact. the art was super cute and programmed in such a way that it really felt brought to life! the music, of course, also helped in this regard. for sure a memorable vn :3

so cute :3 !

i really enjoyed this! each story was memorable in its own way, and then the reveal at the end... AND THEN GOING THROUGH IT AGAIN.... wow!! you accomplished so much in such a short period of time, and i loved reading about your influences in the notes section. i totally think you captured the vibes you were aiming for perfectly! :)

AAAUUGHH....... i was so drawn in by the atmosphere the whole time and even tho i vaguely had some dread from the beginning (and was honestly doing my best to ignore the red flags of our pov character), i couldve never imagined how everything culminated in such a wicked disaster. fabulous read, i really enjoyed it and there are so many moments where i was just like totally getting emotional, feeling disgust, feeling crazy amounts of dread, or even experiencing positive emotions while enjoying the punishment bits.... its an emotional rollercoaster. the type of story that reminds me WHY i enjoy toxic yuri at all to begin with. WONDERFUL.

this is AMAZING, i hope SINCERELY that everyone on this page downloads this visual novel because everything about it was stellar. the character designs, their personalities, the conflict they find themselves in... i was drawn in and HOOOOOOKED the whole time. utterly fantastic work, i seriously cannot recommend this ENOUGH.

i really enjoyed this!! there are many entries i love that feel like fairytale's in their own right, but i enjoyed how this one in particular was framed specifically as someone narrating the entire tale. that small shift in perspective was really cool and gives it a unique flavor. also the backgrounds were really nice, i loved the use of patterns. congratulations on your first vn :3 !!

kalve deserves the award for THEE most patient bat girl of all time. i'm glad we get to see her have a supportive community willing to stick up for her at the gym, and cute scenes of her hanging out with sybille. it was such a challenge to read some of avesta's hateful thoughts because i'm reminded that there seriously are insane people like that out there, but the ending scene at the pride parade again really brought everything full circle. congratulations on your first game :) !

the text is so wonderful, i really felt like i was transported to a different time and place. i also really enjoyed the character sprites. looking forward to more for sure!

wow thank you so much for such a thoughtful review!! I’m honestly at a total loss for words but I appreciate it so much, and I’m glad to see that a lot of what I was aiming for came across ;;w;; <3

i adore your art style, it reminds me of aya takano's tarot deck illustrations, but is also unique in its own way. simply gorgeous! the overall atmosphere of this story feels so whimsical yet so dark, and you nailed the balance perfectly. definitely glad i checked it out <3

it's like reading a fairytale or looking at a beautiful painting... i loved it and the mix of pixel art and photographic backgrounds was done really well. kinda makes me wanna be a mermaid too. also, even if the ending is just a little sad, it's also super gay and i love that... <3

this is so creative! it reminds me of games like hypnospace outlaw or who's lila (both of which i LOVE), where you can kind of snoop around in web pages/files and see how to progress further. i was really intrigued by the small bits of world-building, and also i thought the voice logs were a really cool addition! it's really remarkable how fast this was put together :) good job~

ok so you pull me in with an intriguing little story about ani y*ut*be then you get me crying in the second story...  BOTH WERE SO GOOD.... i loved the plot of the first one and i feel like we really get to embody the humble weaboo's pov, and then in the second one it's like so poetic and by the end had me screaming, YES, I BELIEVE IN LOVE,,, I BELIEVE IN LOVE, EVEN WITH PAIN!!! 

OUUUGHHH LYNNIE the most painful part, is as a bpd-haver (not trying to diagnose her or anything btw just tryna relate), i understand her fear of abandonment + how its just so ingrained even in childhood.... i can feel empathy for her but at the same time, PUT DOWN THE FISH TOY.... LET MEL BREATHE.... GOOD GOD... which btw that scene was written So Well and is probably one of the most original erotic scenarios i've ever read. lowkey i wanted it to happen so i'm glad it did. but yeah, i enjoyed it a lot!! it was tunatastic! <3

THIS WAS SO GOOD.... it sort of felt like reading a comic, i loved how it told the story non-traditionally for a vn, where its all just cgs instead of like sprites. even images with more negative space felt impactful. your understanding of expression and composition is like SOOOOOO HECKING GOOD, and the disturbing parts were sold so well. especially in the dream sequence its like in my mind i could see everything shifting and moving... i was totally hooked from beginning to end!! GAHHH IT WAS JUST SO GOOD, if you look up the definition for psychosexual i think this vn should appear right there <3

DAMNNN THIS MADE ME WANNA GET A JOB AS SECURITY IN AN OFFICE BUILDING JUST TO SEE WHAT JUICY STUFF I CAN CATCH ON THE CAMS. watching with my popcorn like 🍿🤏🤤

wahh my heart, devastating yet beautiful read <3

btw, wanted to check—you cool with fanart?

40k words is intense for a jam, awesome work finishing it and getting it out there! i really enjoyed the chemistry between lucy and freyja, and sometimes i was enjoying it so much i had to remind myself, omg, isnt this a toxic yuri jam?! and toxic yuri it ended up being waahhh </3 but it was a good pain~ also, i enjoyed how expressive the sprites were :) good job to the team!!

i thought the art and presentation was really nice, especially the cgs. overall the visual elements definitely gave it the retro vibe you were going for :3 i also liked the writing at times where the scenes were more explicit about the love triangle situation. will be planning a funeral for gen-kun tho /halfjoking.

omg i enjoyed this a lot and the best part was i feel like there were little hints of the true nature of everything all along the way... and yet i still got got!!! very fun twist :3

its peak

i enjoyed this, it's like a poem~

fun read :) ! i enjoyed the cg art at the ends, and i also thought the presentation of the speech being in bubbles like a comic was a really fun choice!

i know it's unfinished, but i enjoyed what was there! i thought the strongest part was how julia's obsession develops so quickly, and the writing of her inner monologue was enjoyable to follow :) i will be rooting for y'all to finish the project! <3

THE DREADDD, THE DREAAAAD!! i was dreading every time we had to pick what medical thing to happen, but it made for a super enjoyable read, i was totally saying "no!! no!!" under my breath at multiple moments... i usually prefer kinetic vns but for this i actually really enjoyed how the various endings totally kept me guessing!! also, i really enjoyed the backgrounds, drawing spaceship interiors seems so hard so i really gotta give props to the background artist especially :3

HOTTT HOTTT HOTTT i loved it, millicent is a really compelling character and i adore the complexity of her showcased in the span of 11k words, ember, too, is an interesting character and so cute lol. like a disaster you cannot look away from--ember was engaging in that way. im a huge sucker for relationships where two people who seem really different actually have some commonality and i was definitely getting that vibe here. i also really like how emotionally evocative the writing was, you have a really good sense of word choice. i was looking forward to this one as soon as you started posting previews of the art and it turned out so good <3 !!

thank you so much!! also yeah… idk why I decided my first vn should be 20k words when I worked on it alone, but thankfully I finished it in the end (coding took way longer than I expected LOL)

Thank you for reading!! 👼

I... WANT... MORE........ RAHHH!!1 SO GOOD!! SO GOOD!!! the sprites + art, the characterization, the story... i enjoyed watching these lil characters do their thing SO much, "end of ver 1" hit me like a FREIGHT TRAIN. its amazing!!!

thank u!! it means a lot waaaaah ;;w;;

LITERALLY SO GOOD.... IT'S HONESTLY HARD TO EVEN PUT IT INTO WORDS... one of my favorites for sure!!!!!

SOOO GOOD i loved both endings, really cool presentation + character designs (especially selene in her ending), the animated opening bit was great and got me immersed immediately :3

i rly enjoyed eleanor's characterization! it was nice to see her a bit vulnerable at the end, it gave me the feelz

i really liked all the art and character designs, love when fucked up girlies find each other <3

thank you so much!!! I’m also excited to make more :)

whoaaa i know it's really short right now but the vibes are SO SLAY, i love the spritework and overall presentation... really excited to see what you do with it in the future!