I like where this is headed! The overall atmosphere and sound design was quite good--I especially liked the typewriter clicks and dings. Would love to see more done with sound to really sell it. I did also find having a ton of the letters within the first few screens a bit of an information overload for backstory, and made it a little harder to really get into the story. I think if there weren't as many frontloaded, the pacing would improve. All in all though, great start, can't wait to see where this one goes! :)