i’ll be honest, i’m not really a visual novel enjoyer, so i only played the beginning, up to the part where Lily is going to the tower and talks about the diary
from the description, it looks like a pretty big and detailed story, so i think this is something you need to sit with for a longer time, especially if you are into visual novels
one thing i was a bit confused about is the jam scope. from the description, it sounds like the game was made over two months, so i’m not sure how it fits the jam rules. maybe i misunderstood something, but it felt a bit unusual for a jam entry
that said, i think the author clearly has something to say with this project. the art and music seem AI-generated, but it feels like there was selection and direction behind them, not just the first random result. here, at least for me, it feels more like a way to help express the idea, mood, feeling and emotion behind the story, so it worked okay for me
the atmosphere is pleasant, and the music worked nicely for the part i played. i think i heard mostly one track, but it helped set the mood
if i was more into horror visual novels with school, romance and mystery themes, i think i would probably spend more time with it
nice work, and good luck with the project!