hhhhhhhooo boy where to begin? so first of all this is really interesting second the meta feature is pretty evergreen and really ignored by everyone but at the same time hard to "control" but you did pretty nicely third at the beginning when i read that the character had mental disease i thought it was gonna be cringe but it wasn't not only the personality and characterization are perfect but you managed to not mess and do a proper job handling those disorder soooo yeah nice job i'll keep a close eye to this (little note: i saw some grammar mistakes but that's not much a problem, instead a real problem is that in some sentences are written the wrong names that are saying those and this confuse thing a lot)