I'm excited to see more of this game! Full route for one of the LIs? That's what I'm talking about!!
I know what you mean about editing. I'm self-editing around 40k words at the moment because I don't trust anyone else to edit (my fault my fault).
I have to say the angelic one sounds more appealing to me because I'm curious where his yandere aspect will come in... and I'm also an angel, after all :P