I absolutely loved this! I was totally captivated by the story--I love the little bits of lore we get about the world and about the MC and Her. I was immediately hooked and felt for the MC. The atmosphere was wonderfully somber, you could just feel the grief in the way she talked about Her. The music really helped with that as well, set the tone very well!
The art was gorgeous as well--I love the contrast between much of the rough, blurry parts to the sharp, focused bits. The minute details on the endings were a nice touch as well! The textbox in particular was a really nice touch.
There were a couple minor polish things that I think you would have caught with more time--I caught a couple small grammatical typos here and there, but nothing major. I did notice the image of the egg on the second and third offering would sometimes revert back to the original uncracked version for a moment and be missing the offerings before they loaded it. Nothing huge though, and didn't detract from the story!
Overall, a fantastic job! I'm left wanting more, it was so intriguing and heartfelt. I can't wait to see more of your projects! <3