The thing is, there is already a LOT of game..... for something so nascent, and reading this, I have to wonder when will the narrative become something 'right' for the Porn in his porn game?
I am happy to grind... but proportionally, I like a pretty even spread, with the adult content coming early, but crescendoing deep through the game.
If his story is epic.. like.. well... literally, an Epic... then slow pacing, holding off the rewards, etc, will not feel so bad by the 23 chapter. By the you will have forgotten it took until chapter.. idk.. 7... to get laid properly will the all womanses of thy Harem. Especially if from then on, you had more and more moments, slowly knitted the Harem fabric together by doing three things... those things being your womanses... at a time.
But man, I think Imma need to bang Pseudo-Mommy and Pseudo Little Sis soon at least... the Cat Girl I can wait on, the big sis girls, well I can wait.. the lil sis' Bff... meh, same....the Professors daughter-slave... well at some point I will need to make her MY daughter-slave... but I can wait..... but if I AM going to have to wait for the NEXT update AFTER this for a lil something something with any of them, then we might have to wait longer than that too.. for 'Narrative Reasons'... but this is an AVN, gimme something, long, multi-phased, well blocked, angled and lit, and deliciously explicit with one of the most TABOO options, then, at least, just to hold us over for the real action!!!! :P