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Honest question, man... did you use AI to generate dialogue?
I played until the part where Jade tells Noemi that she doesn't want to go clubbing with her again, and Noemi tells her that she can be so energetic on 5 hours of sleep naturally and it's called "being Italian" continued with her listing things that seem "common" for Italian daily life (in a kinda stereotypical way but i don't care about that, the problem is the dialogue)
Not gonna lie, a lot of (if not all) the dialogue in the game so far feels like it was AI generated, it's very very (to avoid saying "the same") similar to those fake "4chan greentext stories" that gained some popularity on YT some time ago and you can find to this day with anime pictures/anime AI generated pictures as the portrait of the "thread" and premises such as "new coworker noticed me", "goth barista seemed rude but she is just weird", "rich girl wanted help but she was lonely" and etc....

The dialogue is just so fake 4chan greentext like that it honestly felt weird and artificial from the start, while some seem a little bit more natural and human written because obviously an AI wouldn't say such thing or write it like that, most of the game so far doesn't and I didn't make it past the introduction chapter yet...

Reading the "meet the cast" on the game's page feels weird now too, i didn't really read em before downloading, but those lines feel like those short "witty" descriptions given on those kind of videos too...

Did you use AI to make the 1st chapter dialogue and added things yourself later to make it seem more natural? Is all the game like this? Did you use AI for the first chapter and then made "Internal Affairs" dialogues fully by yourself?

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Out of all negative comments about all of my work in my life this is most definitely the worst one I ever received and the most insulting to me.

Every single line of dialogue in my game is hand-typed by ME.

I fucking DESPISE AI and any usage of it. ESPECIALLY IN CREATIVE WORK.
I even advertise the game as AI-FREE and completely made by me.

I get that not everyone has to like my dialogues, my writing style and my humour, but seriously asking me if I used ai for it is just the biggest spit in the face I got since I started creating this game and iam saying that after receiving many literal d3@th threats.

Writing stories, scripts, plots, and especially dialogues, was and is, one of my fav hobbies and every single new update takes usually 4 months to make because i spend around 2 months on JUST the writing. 
And I need at least 3 of my friends to proof-read the whole thing few times to catch the atrocious ammount of the typos that I do.

Sorry you don't like my writing or maybe it just doesn't hit the right notes with your style. That's completely okay and I understand that.

But I never used AI to write things for me and NEVER WILL.

If you decide to play the game more, maybe my style will hit the right tone for you sometime later in the story. But if it won't, then my game might just not be the game for you.

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W author/dev. Don't listen to the haters and only listen to feedback and valid criticism of the game. I haven't played your game yet, in fact this is the first time I've been here lmao. I was revisiting novels/artists from 1-5 years ago and your novel was in the recommended/suggested. I guess I have to now xdd. I hope the story would be longer/rich as I don't really fancy the sex scenes in these as I usually just admire or skip them. Yeah I know reading an avn and not watching the sex scenes seems odd but AVN authors are a different breed when it comes to story telling. I guess AVNs are just less boring sometimes. Sorry for the yap, good luck on your writing career!

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I'm sorry to hear people threatened you and I appreciate you doing this by hand makes its all much better too appreciate.