Alright, thank you for letting me know. Will try it soon!
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Quick question, does this game give you the path on which to choose (Like if I'm gonna use said powers in the game description to take advantage of people) or is it more of a linear experience and the story/MC corrupts people by choice almost immediately (Because mc is also a demon from the looks of it and I assume is kinda evil right from the start)?
I'd be more than happy to do so. Though I don't know if I can drop game names here so there's that. But if the dev here will allow it I'll list down only some of them for now. I can delete this comment too if I need to.
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Eternum - ongoing
My time with you - ongoing
The arson betrayal - ongoing
Cosy cafe- ongoing
Once in a lifetime - finished
Pale carnations - ongoing (I'd be careful of this one)
The inn - ongoing
Ripples - ongoing
Dissonance - ongoing (also careful with this one. Probably one of, if not, the longest AVN I've ever read).
Out of touch (acid trip so I'm unsure if it's a good idea to recommend this, oh and this is a VERY"careful" emotional baggage AVN)
Stormside - ongoing
The headmaster - ongoing ( also careful with this one) also, this is a sandbox game but the story at the very end where the last update left of is quite interesting.
These aren't necessarily only the ones in my S-tier list, some of them are in the A-tier list. The ones I tagged "careful" are AVN's that has some morality problems and/or are emotionally heavy (can't specify as comment would be too long). I could go into details why these are the ones I recommended but this really isn't the place. But the short version is that these AVN's are very story rich and focused, good at said story, and sometimes player choice heavy which I appreciate for more personalization. These aren't the only AVN's that Id recommend and know but these are the ones that I could think of on the top of my head (plus if you intend on reading all these, it should keep you occupied for like a week's at the very least for up to a year if you space them out lol). If you're still curious about the details and would like me to spill details rather than checking them out yourself, I can drop my email and all that.
Spoiler free! This game is easily one of the best AVN's I've read so far, as for someone who plays these games mainly for the lore rather than the scenes. The romantic chemistry between everyone was very organic. The writing and setting were all neatly planned and executed. At first it was about internal problems and conflicts but it got dialed up to an 11 when the real story started about the shady happenings in the city that our protagonist has been living in. There's really nothing much else to say other than this was very well made! If i was to be ask if there was something to be improved on, i might stretch it and say "Speed of days" or "in game time". If you were to take the days and everything that's been happening in the story, it'd be pointing out that everything happened so fast within just days where as it shouldve taken at least a few months if it were to happen realistically. This isn't inherently bad though, as it avoided the thing that most AVN's do which is dragging out some bullshit for content padding. If it needs to be that fast then i don't mind that much as i understand that thinking of more content is not that easy of a task. But to be honest, i think im just biased about the pacing thing because i couldnt get enough of the storyline LMAO (so don't mind me about "realistic timing" this is an AVN afterall and like i said, im just salty that i reached the end so fast and i wanted more). On a serious note, it really is one of the best AVN's out there. I've read/played tons of AVN's (and story-driven sandboxes)and i can confidently say that this is the 7th game that i placed in my S-tier AVN's alongside the greatest AVN's in this site. I won't drop game names out of respect for the dev but i think if you know, you know (currently i only have 8 games on that list and i've played close to about 60 AVN's). Thank you for this wonderful piece that im happily attached to now. Keep up the good work and i hope for the best Cosy!!! PS: I was gonna rate this game much much earlier (like close to 2 months ago) i think but i forgot and got distracted by other AVN's lol.
This game is pretty good! The chemistry between the people in the story were pretty organic and convincing for most of them! Every episode has something new or interesting to bring to the table. The world building is all so well woven into each other. The locations, the settings, the mood, the themes, and the atmosphere were mostly all very well done as well. The H scenes were ample enough to let the feelings be expressed to the reader. I'm not exactly playing these games to get off but rather to see how these different devs take on something that's normally made for the sole purpose of getting a person off (Well I also tend to get bored with regular visual novels because the characters are limited to how they show they're love for each other so I play these AVN's focusing on their plots). For me, this game is up there amongst the top tier AVN's! If you know them, you know them. I won't drop other games out of respect for devs in their own comment section and I don't want to seem like I'm advertising. If I do have to be critical about the game then I will now state the very small problems I had with the game but I don't hate these either! Still no spoilers ahead so don't worry. The timeline at the very beginning. Things just passed by way too fast and the events didn't seem to have a ground to stand on so it came off weak but so did some of the other masterpieces I've read/played so it's fine. The late begining chapters till the early end chapters were the most perfect parts. The last chapters had this H scene problem. Unlike the perfect chapters, the end just didn't have that connection that the characters portrayed in the perfect chapters.... It was especially evident on the very last H scene (season 1) because it just jumped cut to the action. I was a little disappointed because these two really had something special and yet they didn't have that special spark that the other chapters have. I just felt like it was a teensy bit rushed. With that being said, it's still up there amongst the greatest AVN's I've ever played/read (S tier) and there were only 7 of them... Now there's 8 AVN's in my personal S-tier list. This really is a wonderful game and I hope that season 2 will live up to it's previous season and I hope that the Dev's devlife and irl life stays well! Thank you for the absolutely fantastic story/game that you made Flynn974! You're doing great!
The Arson Betrayal (V. 0.7.5) (NSFW 18+) comments · Posted in The Arson Betrayal (V. 0.7.5) (NSFW 18+) comments
Read a lot of these games for the plot and this is just a masterpiece. Aside from very few errors that needed to be rolled back, some grammatical errors, and some spelling errors, this game is so damn good. I already read/play these games mainly for the plotline rather than the "H-scenes" that these type of games tend to focus on but oh boy, I didn't even take a second to just look at the sex scenes because everything is just so tense! The pacing of the story is immaculate, the people are ALIVE, the love chemistry is organic, the main plot is fantastic, and the story telling is on another level! I've been playing a lot of these games for a while now and this is easily one of the few S-tier stories/games I've read/played so far among, probably, almost a hundred that I've looked at. Even if someone forced me to say anything even a little bad at this game/story I'd be struggling to think of an excuse to say any! So, with me in amazement, I looked into the devlogs and how's it going and saw that the dev was struggling with something in real life and it's safe to say that I wasn't happy either. I am happy that the dev is reassuring their community but I really do hope the dev doesn't rush things in their life problems. The updates can wait but the Dev's overall wellness is much more important. Stay safe Crispy Chicken! I hope everything turns out well on your end. And thank you for this absolutely beauty of a game!!!
Thank you for taking the time to read that lengthy comment. Since everything was covered I think I can say that I am happy for you and your game. May you continue to be better with the codes and technical stuff for making the game that you envision it to be. I'm sure that if you keep going in that direction, you'll do great. Thank you again and I hope you do well!
This game overall is very good when you compare it to most the AVN's out there. That's pretty much the short version. Now for the long version. I absolutely love the main plotline of this AVN, it's something new and that's refreshing to see. As for me who plays these AVN's mainly for the plotlines, I do have some things that I wanted to be improved upon but I would never impose upon the author. I want to start this off with making sure that I really do think that this game is so good so the following things I'm about to discuss are just my preferences and not necessarily criticism in any way, shape, or form. Also I am aware that games like these MOSTLY target people who are looking for something to get off to so really these words mean nothing. The storyline itself is pretty good, the issue I have with it is that it's all done very quickly with not much room to bond the player/reader with the story's characters. The schedules were also off and it ruined the immersion that I had (vacation this weekend = a month I think, meet Angelo on Monday = also a month I think) so I distracted myself to not ruin it further for me. The girls were also pretty much on the player's nose most of the time because if you say/do something they like they'll immediately jump you on a relationship the next or few interactions later, in short there were no bonding over with them too aside from what's given to us readers which is mostly transitional months. So I think this lead to an overall a quick experience (I finished it in one day but that's not a bad thing).One thing's for sure though, Richard and Clark were some of the best characters in this particular genre of AVN's! I was stoked to see that another AVN managed to design likable males (well I get that Clark is gay but I meant in terms of natural sex). So overall I really liked this so far. Will I still be reading/playing the next chapters? Absolutely! Do I expect anything to change? Not really because it's hard enough to make an AVN let alone a lone dev and from the looks of it it's not the Dev's main source of income so it could be hard to balance everything. So absolutely no pressure, you're doing great Poopcicle!!! So that's about everything, a solid 4/5. Thank you for this adorable AVN Poopcicle!!! Have a nice day
I was stoked to find out that this is more of a long con in terms of lewdness and it's much more gravitated towards its lore/story. As someone who plays these games with the intention of looking into the plotlines, the game is going pretty well. Without spoilers, in terms of AVN standard it's easily a perfect game so far. If I had to point something that I didn't like (but not necessarily hate because I understand what kind of game this is and what it's used for) was the pacing of the girls and the whole campus. By pacing, I meant that it's all going way too fast specifically for me since I was told that this was not going to be one of those games only to get off to. I'm also noticing that even outright h-scenes from different games are more modest than how the girls handle their clothing because those were really short skirts and almost everyone basically had their panties out in broad daylight. But like I said I can't really complain about that because in the end of the day it's still an AVN and it wouldn't be fair for me to complain. So overall I think what I'm trying to say is that it could use some slowing down but by doing so it could be hard to keep tabs on there girls as well because if the author did slow down the girls' lewdness progression the author probably would be writing this story for a decade lmao. It's just that almost every relationship seems so organic and not forced and it's hard to not complement that with a slower approach in their relationship with the mentor so they may be characters that will bond with the reader and make them a lasting memory just like how famous novel characters are remembered. Now my realistic hope for this game (setting aside my preferences), first that it never gets abandoned because it really is a joy to read, second is to have impactful choices in the future, and third is to not waste the potential organic chemistry between the girls and the mentor. Overall, so far, it's an 8/10. I think it's fair to say that you're doing a really really good job. Thank you BRdsky for this awesome experience!!! I will for sure come back to this after a while.
Oh, no problem! Been pretty much giving feedback to games I've played in the past because it has been my way to say thanks to the tireless developers who stick with their project/s even when irl stuff are getting harder and harder these days. About the story conflicts, they're really not that bad from my experience. I'm just too invested to games I play that I hyperfixate on things you won't usually pay attention to to these types of games but it is reassuring to know that you're working on that too! As for the technicalities, I understand that Android is pretty hard to deal with (as I've seen on countless other AVN's) so none of it is your guys' fault. I do have a good PC and I did play very few AVN's there but (mainly those with no Android ports) they've been probably sitting there for months or even years because with AVN's I just really want to chill lying down. So it really just comes down to the users/players in the technical parts but then again, it's reassuring that you're also working on that too. It maybe small but I think it'll help people who don't have good phones and or computers/laptops (especially on phones that treat games like it's on desktop aka:minimizing game when you pull your notifications bar). Small note, it's pretty funny that AHITR somewhat forced me to put all attention to it because I can't even pull the notification bar without risking a crash lol, it made me focus on the game more hence; understand and digest the story better (?) I don't know it's just a schizo theory so don't take this personally lmao. (It was actually quite nice because I DND mode my phone to not get notifications lmao). Thank you again! By far the most involved dev/s, y'all are doing a great job ^^
As someone who plays AVN's solely for the plots this has been an interesting one so far. I am aware that these games are mostly made for satisfying yourself so it would be fair if you're raising your eyebrow reading this. Now, without spoiling anything, this has to be one of the better sandbox AVN's out there. Usually sandbox AVN's are notorious for its lengthy, drawn out, and boring "in betweens" where you need to attain an obscene amount of goals before the plot progresses and fortunately the closest thing to an "in between" is the fridge and that is super easy to get by. Now as a sandbox type AVN it held itself up on the story conflicts pretty well, it wasn't perfect because it's inevitable if you have favorite characters that you wanted to interact with a lot more (non spoiler example is a character was supposed to not talk to me because of a disagreement but when this character was involved with another character's story, they're now talking to me like normal). The main story itself is pretty interesting and important to not get diluted in the plethora of character stories and dialogues throughout the game. As for the character stories it was pretty good too but of course I have story/stories which I didn't really clicked with and that's ok because it doesn't really force anything on you. As for the romance progression, it wasn't too fast but also not slow enough. The romance dynamics were also more on the organic side, it doesn't really turn everyone to a brainwashed and glorified sex toy like many other AVN's out there and that in itself is very good for me. I have to say though, this game wouldve been an awesome regular AVN because the direction of the stories were so good (Not to say that it's a bad sandbox game, plus I might be biased because i play more regular AVN's). On the technical side, it had very few problems like start up times are slow and if you slide down your phone's notifications it'll "minimize" the app a little bit and freezes. It sometimes crashes and it wipes autosaves for some reason. My phone is not a gaming phone per say but it's not bad either, it's a Redmi note 11 6gb version. To end my comment/rating/criticism (call it whatever you like) I'd like to say some advice. I did make some mistakes that made my playthrough worse and that is to accept all dreams as soon as they pop up. The journal kept on growing and some of them prevented some interactions that I wanted to interact with but then again that was a mistake on my part because I mostly play regular AVN's. So if you want a smooth sailing experience I'd say take your time on each of the characters and gauge whether you can afford to do so. Because it's better if you connect to them as smoothly as possible rather than them changing personalities because the individual story progressions aren't synced up. And yes I did redo the story from the top to come up with this advice and it was indeed more pleasant. That's all for me and thank you for a good story and a good game zanith! Hope all goes well
I'm someone who unironically plays these type of AVN's for their plots mainly because the novels and interactive novels (mainly rpg novels) I used to read were not doing me enough. Not enough feelings and emotions I guess, and I have to say that this novel was so good. The game warned me about "not taking itself seriously" but I don't believe that because this has way more feelings and emotions than most of the AVN's that I played. It has some light hearted comedy, yes, but it really does seem like this isn't just an AVN for "getting off". The characters doesn't feel like they're just a glorified sex toys, the main character is very likeable and the comedy in it is in the right places (mostly...). If I HAD to pick a bad thing about this game is that it's too damn short! But I think that's good (I still want it to be longer though, especially because this game is too damn good) because a lot of these AVN's, I end up abandoning because they drag out some unnecessary plot points and sometimes even bring bullshit plot points to further stretch it out but I also did finish some games that took literal days because some AVN's stories were so good (I know these games are meant for "getting you off" and yeah it's my fault I keep playing these games looking for plot). So all in all I give it an "Imaginary friend" out of "Imaginary friend". (10/10 because the author is an absolute mad 10 irl I'm sure). Thank you Lykanz!!!
