Hi. I played your game, and there are several interesting points. I finished the game. When I entered the final room—there are only two rooms total, as I understand—I fell down and was just surrounded by a grey screen, and nothing was happening. I had to restart the game (closing and reopening it). On that note, it would be good to add an ‘Exit to Menu’ button within the game itself.
Regarding the main menu: the text looks unreadable when launching the game. I had to strain my eyes to make out what was written. This is due to the effect that makes the screen look like a television. Also, the spacebar did not work for me. It is also unclear why buttons were needed to look up or down.
For a first game, it was quite good. However, it’s not entirely clear how invincibility works, except that you do not lose lives when you dash through a dog.
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Thanks for the playing, I wanted to add a menu when you press the escape button but I didn't had enough time, I tried to block the Ways where you can escape and fall off, and I am a begginer in pixel art and I wanted to make sure that it looks better than I though so I wanted to hide it with this effect
And the effect was too strong so you couldn't read the story but the story says that the dogs got the holy tennis ball amd need to stop them before they become invicible.
Thanks you for your honest reply
I will keep an eye on these things on my second game this was usefull👍
And I love hollow knight where you can look up and down so when I started to make this in the first hour you could look up and down